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Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
Technical Quality:
The exposure is very good in this photo, the lighting is soft and appealing and the white balance appears to be perfectly selected. I like the softness that you've managed to achieve in this photo and the focus on your main subject is clear and crisp. Very little discernible noise and your DOF adds to the overall affect of the photo.
Composition:
I would have cropped it tighter since there is a fair amount of distracting wasted space in the photo that leads the eye away from your subject. The flower stalk in the background adds an interesting geometrical element to the photo as does the intersecting one at the top of the photo.
I do feel there maybe too many dark areas in the photo but it doesn't make the photo feel unbalanced, it adds to the mood of the photo.
Emotional Appeal:
I like this photo, the only thing I would have done differently is make the crop tighter to get rid of the wasted space. I do feel that you've managed to convey a story with this photo, it feels soft and dreamy and almost wishful (as if the photographer was missing summer or something).
Nice job overall.
(I used a format for critiquing photos that I just posted into a news article to make it easier to give them).